Cliche' paragraph:
My name is Ciara. I have dark hair like a midnight sky. My eyes are like two almonds. I have a bright smile to brighten up any day. My face looking like I just at too much sugar and decided to hang out in tree. Thats me, in the tree.
Good paragraph:
Turning back to see the camera. Anxiously waiting for the Ghost Hunters International cast to arrive. My smile big and my dimples deep. The look in my face makes me want to go back and sit in that very seat once again. My hair shinny like a new paint job on an old car. It's me, Ciara.
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