Saturday, October 11, 2008

"Blurb"

My grandma is my hero because she has always helped me to go forward in life. She has always pushed me to do things she knows would help me out in the future. She is so encouraging and is always there when I need her.
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Gabe said...

I think you could end it better, its good don't get me wrong, but I think could reword your last sentence a bit better.

October 14, 2008 at 12:53 PM

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